Hi.... its me.
You asked for CRITIQUE on discord.

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-anime avatar ??? We will see myke's policy on big anime when he is awake...
- academy - is this officers academy bro? When did he enter. Academy = basic training?
-  how did he get his nick name bleeding heart and why. 
- why is he called geneva but not bleeding heart does he have 2 nicknames.
- low rank soldier sides and speaks a public unpopular opinion. Wouldent this shame his aristocratic family.
- enlisted soldier challenging officers to duels for what are essentially war crimes instead of reporting them to judicial authorities. Yes u can say "they r officers they'd walk" but u could say u used your aristocratic power to get the mps on them.
- duel of honor. Does the loser die. If so why. Also presumed enlisted soldier dueling officers.
- too out spoken. Why would they pick him, he has a history of objecting to questionable conduct and also dueling officers. Why would they pick someone who from a outsider standpoint has a authority problem / sandbags anything that might harm pows or civs.


Hope this helped.