[quote=@DeadDrop]
Hi.... its me.
You asked for CRITIQUE on discord.

Ok

-anime avatar ??? We will see myke's policy on big anime when he is awake...
- academy - is this officers academy bro? When did he enter. Academy = basic training?
-  how did he get his nick name bleeding heart and why. 
- why is he called geneva but not bleeding heart does he have 2 nicknames.
- low rank soldier sides and speaks a public unpopular opinion. Wouldent this shame his aristocratic family.
- enlisted soldier challenging officers to duels for what are essentially war crimes instead of reporting them to judicial authorities. Yes u can say "they r officers they'd walk" but u could say u used your aristocratic power to get the mps on them.
- duel of honor. Does the loser die. If so why. Also presumed enlisted soldier dueling officers.
- too out spoken. Why would they pick him, he has a history of objecting to questionable conduct and also dueling officers. Why would they pick someone who from a outsider standpoint has a authority problem / sandbags anything that might harm pows or civs.

Hope this helped.
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1.) I can change it.
2.) Officer's Academy, which includes basic training, but also tactics and strategy. And he entered at 16 as a cadet.
3.) Let's just say that he had a few too many confrontations with other students as regards 'the honorable way of doing things'.
4.) I was trying to imply that his nickname [i]changed[/i].
5.) Low-ranking [i]officer[/i], actually; he already has some standing. As for shaming his family, normally yes, but the Greys stand by their family due to their belief in their responsibilities.
6.) The war crimes get MPs and judicial action. Mere corruption (lining pockets with money meant for the war effort) gets duels.
7.) Duel is only until first blood or unconsciousness.
8.) I think Myke implied that the peace talks are going to get ambushed by someone or something, or otherwise derailed. My own personal view is that the Earth Empire knows their diplomats are going to get attacked in the course of the RP, and hopes Alexander gets killed in the process.