[@Letter Bee]

Review aa requested. I just read the sheet got no contextual understanding of the rp. Anyone reading this and getting scared, I'm bit affiliated with the rp just got asked to do this. 

1) Why is he such an idealist? 
2) Parts of your psych profile don't make sense. Go over it again. 
3) If his parents area as idealistic, how has his family retained status among the corrupt. They're a weak link and aren't going to play the same political games as everyone else. 
5) so was he put in with just the run of the mill cadets? 
6) How did he discover this differences? What was the result? 
7) So these cadets were from high ranking families, as they were already corrupt? There were no people there to just try for a better life? 
8) Had he never come in contact with any other high ranking/status officials before? If so how did he not notice the corruption? 
9) Bleeding Heart implies that he's not going against people but instead caring too much. Also I assume by title you mean what other people think of him and not a callsign? Callsigns are typically simple things that roll off the tounge. 'Skyguy' 'Farm boy' 'Starbuck' 'Apollo''Buckshot'
10) Why would a lesser person lose faith or go into denial? Why didn't he? He loves the empire and people, how can he justify this? 
11) In the military you can't just speak out against superiors. 
12) if he's really speaking out against the empire they can just get rid of him, if his family is as goody two shoes as you say I can't imagine they're gonna do much in terms of manipulation to stop it or get him back. Not to mention he's a combat pilot, not terribly hard to get rid off. Did anyone say suicide mission? 
13) Why would he challenge them to a duel? Why would they accept? 
14) How did that gain him authority? 
15) Why did the superiors he challenged to duels, and beat not dispose of him? 
16) Wouldn't he try to avoid being too outspoken? As I said above, he'd be easy enough to get rid off.

These are the points I noticed without reading background.