"[i]The mighty centaur, Krubones has been stabbed by a Demon having a human appearance with a dagger that felt like melting iron in his stomach. His two friends, Helaem and Helsing were quickly transported Krub' to a nearly village where a beautiful elf woman who apparently knows medicine decided to heal the wounded centaur. Krubones is bleeding, she brings quickly tissues to stop the blood from coming out. After a few minutes, she brings a little beautiful shaped book where she begins to read in a foreign language. After that, Krubones feels a pain at the place where his wound was, he sees his mana coming out alons with a dark mana. His 2 friends are waiting for him outside the elf's house...[/i]

I want to integrate this in the upcoming episode of the roleplay I actually run. But i'm not sure yet because in my opinion it really makes Krubones look "weak" (of course, his actions bringed him here). But I'm afraid that players won't like this part.

Do you guys have some Ideas to integrate my roleplay or some general things that makes a roleplay better?
I would like to hear them.


Thank you for reading and sorry for my English, not my main language.