[@shylarah] [quote=Chandler]When in doubt, have a man come through a door with a gun in his hand.[/quote] I already did that, but it was the main character. Am now stepping it up to ten men with chainsaws. [quote=@POOHEAD189] My problem is shipping. I do not know who is best with who. #actionscenewriterproblems [/quote] an option is to have your characters do what real humans do: make horrible mistakes and lash out at one another, ruining everything and leaving only a long hard road to emotional recovery as the true ending.