Alright, let's judge the people... While Vergil checks out, I've begun to feel iffy with Midnight. Not because it's a pony or anything, but because Midnight's an Alicorn. The MLP setting has it that Alicorns are pretty rare and for good reason. Without going into powers, Alicorns tend to be of the "Special Snowflake" quirk. I'm sorry if I'm making this a huge issue, but keep in mind that the fandom threw their arms up at [i]official[/i] Alicorns whenever they're shown. While most of the powers I don't mind, the backstory sort of grates with me. First off, the Discord-verse implies that the universe was ruled by Discord, and if that was true, everything wouldn't be "dark", but rather surreal. I mean like cotton candy clouds raining liquid chocolate, buffaloes dancing in tutus, buildings fly upside down while the floor below you is checkerboard blue and purple... Stuff like that. Dark is also a pretty vague word, especially for My Little Pony. Does Dark mean that the moon will last forever? Does it mean that Ponies are regularly made into happy meals for Changeling armies? Does it mean that there are jagged black crystals everywhere while the pony version of Sauron sits in his throne and smiles evilly while people carry crystals around like slaves? Be more specific. The wording does seem to say that when you mean dark, you mean darkness, like as in the absence of light. Again, I have nothing against the show and as a matter of fact like it, but the profile just... doesn't click with me sometimes and just grates me the wrong way at other times. Like would the sons of Sparda really be cool with turning into ponies? Maybe in some crack fic... But having Midnight be stronger than him? Yeeeaaah no. I apologize, but there's a lot of things that I just feel doesn't really work for me. I'm rejecting all three of those signups. Rain, your characters are accepted. Alright, here's the problems with Scorn. The first problem is that one of the Red Lantern's powers is to infect others with rage and make them Red Lanterns as well... When I read this, my thought processes just crashed and I was like "WUT". Not only that, but in the backstory, rape was implied, something I've warned against in the section discussing tone. Not only that, but it seemed really unnecessary. I apologize, but I'm rejecting this profile. Now for the postponed judging of Jericus and Victor-55. While I like Victor-55 and the Multiversal Hunters, the grammar errors could lead to some heavy problems and some people may find it headache inducing. I'm not rejecting them based on something as petty as that, but they're not going into the RPG until grammar's improved.