[quote=@Alfhedil]
[@Kitty] You got a few disconnects here and there where it looks like you went back and added or edited things. Namely in the middle of the Appearance section there's a paragraph that starts with talking about her height, then a couple sentences afterwards breaks up between one topic and discussing her height again before breaking back into another topic. You also reference Katalina's sister by two different names later in the background section lol.

Other than that, it looks alright enough to me.
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Sorry about that, there were a few things i realized I forgot that I tried to add once I had finished. I will definitely read through it again and make it flow better in the morning. Also the names were probably due to lovely autocorrect by my browsers grammar add on, it really didn't like the names I had lol. Thank you for catching the ones I failed to catch and fix myself.