[@Rune_Alchemist] There are choices that could be made there, so a moment's pause there.

[@Eklispe] So, um. Aiming super-effective moves on Pokémon you intend to catch, eh? Alright, then.

[@Joshua Tamashii] Jacques had multiple things he wanted to ask, asking them in a line would be unnatural, but I didn't want to make that three posts in a row, so here. My compromise. Hah.

[@Pikmin Eye] I will note, I do believe Nincada should have previously learned Sand-Attack, but I don't see that in your little hider. Anyways. I will note, if you want to go down the pool yourself later, I won't allow you to automatically breathe underwater. xD 
Nicely posted, and moving on.