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[hider=Paulus][b]Name:[/b]Paulus Ordo
[b]Nobility:[/b]No
[b]Sex:[/b]Male
[b]Race:[/b]Armenian
[b]Age:[/b]21
[b]Physical Description:[/b] A tall, handsome man standing at 6’, Paulus has a strong body. He has average dark skin and a light layer of facial hair. His round face is dominated by a strong nose, and his green eyes sit under a full head of shaggy hair. 
[b]Rank:[/b]Trooper
[b]Magic-Rank:[/b]NA
[b]Goals/Aspirations:[/b] Paulus has an obsession with order, and wishes to use his talents in the military to protect the land and lifestyle he loves. 
[b]Personality:[/b] Paulus can hold his own in a conversation, only occasionally being seen as stubborn and overzealous about his world view if the topic turns that way. Paulus feels indebted to the nobility, a unique stance for a commoner. Deep down, Paulus cares for the welfare of his peers, but is a little annoyed when they don’t see the nobility the same way he does. 
	Paulus is a very focused individual and doesn’t care much for drink or revelry. He also isn’t very interested in finding a bride, believing one would only be a distraction. This makes Paulus a very diligent worker, and he often devotes the energy he would put into socializing or expressing himself into his work; whatever it may be.
 
[b]Backstory:[/b]
	Paulus’s father fought in the twilight of the American revolution as one of Optimate’s Dragoons. Unfortunately he lost his arm, but by the grace of the Almighty, he was able to return to his family alive and well. After returning home, a young, landed noble took pity on the brave soldier, and saw to it that he was well taken care of. His experiences in the new world left Paulus’s father with a poor opinion of democracy, an opinion only cemented by the generosity of the nobleman. 
	Paulus is the first and only child of his parents, and his father began to teach him from a young age that the structure and power of the Byzantine Empire was ordained by the Lord and to be protected with his life. Starting him at age seven, the families benefactor provided Paulus with a tutor who taught Paulus basic mathematics, science, literature, and combat. This lasted until Paulus was 15 and the Mamluk rebellion began. The conflict destabilized the noble that had kept a kind eye over their family for years, and he was unable to care for them any longer. Fortunately, Paulus was at an age to begin work, and his able body and work ethic found jobs to support his family, despite the hard times the community was experiencing. While he worked, his body maturing and growing strong, he mused that his troubles all stemmed from peasants in Cairo who were ungrateful to their noble masters and were foolish enough to revolt. (Ignorant that the rebellion was lead by nobility.) 
	Paulus worked many jobs. A number of times he would attempt to become an apprentice, but no master was able to keep him long due to the lack of resources during the war. This ended up benefitting Paulus, as he was a hard worker and was able to learn bits and pieces from many trades. When he wasn’t in contact with a craftsman, Paulus would take on work as a common laborer or a servant. Eventually, the rebellion came to a close and prospects began to look up for the family. Instead of being a happy time for the family, Paulus’s father passed. Paulus took little time to grieve his father,though. He knew that was not what his father would have had his son be preoccupied with grief when he could be serving the nation. Instead, he entrusted his mother in the care of relatives and enlisted to become a member of the imperial army. [/hider]

Fixed your typos. Looks good to me IMO.