So, advice, please! I have a female character masquerading as a male. She's also very outspoken about my main character, a captain of a ship, being incompetent. Naval code means she should be flogged if she says something too harsh against the leader. Do I go through with it? Pros: Difficult scene that will challenge MC's morality. Will out female character as female, something that I need a way to do Will show that bad things really do happen at sea Will build conflict Cons: I'm concerned it might be too much. I've had violence, but this'll be brutality, not fighting for one's life. I don't want to give the wrong idea with outing the female character. I'm concerned that this might. That's my thinking, at least! Thoughts?