[@Kassarock]

[quote]The first issue with your C.S. is that you only gave me a picture, when I said that written descriptions were mandatory.[/quote]

Tactical written description inbound. ETA: this evening.

[quote]Regardless of whether or not his family life was something you wanted to keep vague, there were areas you could have expanded  upon - what was he doing in the time between leaving home and joining the Band? What were circumstances in which he joined the Band?[/quote]

Yeah, I had planned to explain that. It does need another paragraph. As for his family, initially it was going to be an orphan situation, but that was too cliche for me. I have a better explanation for him now, which I plan to keep secret.

[quote]The other issue I have is with your equipment section. The longbow you've linked in there is extremely light draw weight, we're talking almost 4x that for a medieval war bow.[/quote]

That was just for visual reference. Can I just write in its draw weight in the description? 

[quote]I'd like for you to have a proper side arm, and little more armour than just what I presume is supposed to be gambeson?[/quote]

How about the one-handed ax pictured at his side? It's not a particularly effective melee weapon, but appears to have a hook on the back, which would be useful. As for armor, he's wearing a steel-plated brigandine, leather gauntlets (the left one being a shooting glove instead), and steel greaves. I'm not sure what could be more practical for an archer. Maybe I'll have a steel helmet on hand for combat. I'll look up a picture.

[quote]I am unsure as to historicity of that quiver design, but I'll let it fly.[/quote]

Quickdraw quiver it is, then.

[quote]In answer to your question, after 3 years of work with the band it is likely you could afford a horse.[/quote]

Her name is Horsey McHorseFace. Or not. Probably not.