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Here is my rough draft for now please feel free to ask me to add anything 
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Name 
Fenros Claude Allaway

Race/Faction
Human From The Kingdom originally but will lead the Rebellion against them.

Age 
30

Description

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Fenros is not a large man compared to some other knights, and while he does not look it he does have a body of a warrior. He is muscular, but not bulky like most brutes. He stands at a modest 5'7" with dirty blonde hair and light blue eyes. He bares scars all over his body from years of combat for the kingdom and pushing himself beyond his limit to ascend the ranks as fast as he could. He was never one to wear fancy robes of exquisite material, preferring to wear more practical clothing. When not in normal attire, his armor (below) is what he can be found in. He found not having a full suit of armor better suited his fighting style. 

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"Class" Knight/General

Motivation 
Fenros was born into a noble class. However his father understood the kingdom was not for the Lords and Ladies, but for the People. This made him appreciate those who served in his castle, treating them like his own family. He knew the names of every servant, and a little about them. He also did not want his children to be raised like spoiled brats, and while at the same time training them to be knights, he also made them do some of work with the servants. Learning everything that needed to be done in the castle and doing it till they were proficient at it. This greatly influenced Fenros as he came to see the true meaning of hard work, and the hardships the peasants went through. Now he can't stand it anymore, being one of the only ones in the kingdom nobility that is disgusted with the other nobles and even king. 

History
Like mentioned above, Fenros had a very different life growing up in the Allaway Castle. His father groomed him to take over the family estate, and values. Trained him to be one of the best swordsman in the kingdom, as his father was. He pushed himself that he was already defeating other knights when he was still a squire. His reputation on the battlefield with both battle and tactics after becoming a knight help raise him to become one of the youngest generals in the kingdom. It helped that he won his men's hearts, and gained their absolute trust. 

Despite that, he was also known for his bluntness for lazy spoiled nobles, quick to call them out for their faults and has been known to throw a few into the castle moats for different reasons. 

Strengths 
A prodigy with the sword.
A formidable tactician.  
He is very charismatic. 
Natural born leader, most of his men fight for him, rather the king. 
Observant.

Weakness 
Women, he can't help but flirt. 
He has a temper at times mostly when it comes to dealing with fat nobles. 
He can get lost in fighting, he enjoys the challenge and can at times fail to see the bigger more important picture. 

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WOOT WOOT. Well, it's a bit of a middle zone of accepted. Just need the two paragraphs at min. One of interaction, one of combat or other specialization. But definitely has my thumbs up for now! Reads like the kind of guy who COULD lead a rebellion. However, I need to point out that he WILL NOT like a good portion of his rebellion people. The Ouroboros for instance are not so....nice. And he probably won't last long without their support. SO is he capable of sucking it up for that?