First draft, tear it apart.
I'll format it a bit probably, once it's accepted.
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Name: Aki Kaze
Age: 11
Height: 5 foot even
Weight: 90 pounds
Appearance: 
[img]https://static.zerochan.net/GUMI.full.724530.jpg[/img]

Power: Suggestion. Aki can mix in powerful suggestions when she speaks. The best way to describe the effect is that it can impart impulses to do what she asks, and can be overcome if a person stops and thinks about why they're suddenly doing what she's asking.

Intro Post: As the bell finally rang, Aki was among her peers frantic rushing to head out for recess. She quickly bounded out of her desk, and was out the door, ready to enjoy her short break before closing out the end of the day. As she made her way outside, she chatted with her friends, excitedly trying to make plans for the quickly approaching weekend. By the time they were outside, Aki and her friends had decided that they'd try to have a sleepover that night after school. She'd need to ask her mom and dad of course, but they were never the kind to say no to something like that.

It was a bright and sunny day out, and within five minutes, a few kids had organized an impromptu game of soccer, which Aki was quick to join in on. She loved soccer, and favored to play the goalie when she got the chance. Lucky for her, nobody else especially wanted to today, so the position was hers for the taking. When she played, she loved to get fully involved, doing things like diving to block the ball, throwing her whole body into it even if it wasn't strictly necessary to do so, or trying to make flashy plays, like spinning to kick the ball back. As the game progressed, she had missed a few blocks because of this, and both teams were even as recess neared it's end. The ball was soon racing towards her, as the opposing team made an attempt to get a final shot in before they'd need to head back inside. Aki, determined not to let this happen, ran to block the ball, which was flying towards the goal through the air. She jumped to try to block it, only for the ball to hit her squarely in the face, which just preceded her blacking out.

Other: I'll think on this.

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