[quote=@Aquaknight] This is such an awesome Concept, law but these are all a bit much for one character I can give an idea how to make this character quirk acceptable! Maybe get rid of the heavenly arsenal, Heaven's Fury, and miracles at least for now. We can talk about it more once they have more control and understanding over their quirk. You can keep the others pretty much the same expect the wing's carry weight to 150 kg, also make the lie detection being unable to detect half truths and lastly make it so the character can only access one set of abilities at any one time for now and after that it'd should be good. It just from the sounds of this quirk the character has too much of an understanding of their quirk for being a first year, unless you have a reason why in their CS why they have such an excessive knowledge of their quirk. I like the idea of this quirk being rather terrifying for everybody since Angels are terrifying. But I hope asking all of these isn't too much! The only lore worry is that this Angel is actually supernatural in nature while there is hints of the supernatural in MHA I don't want any thing so blatant such, so is it like Dark shadow? If it is then its fine~ [/quote] Excellent feedback! I'm more than happy to scale back my character a understanding of the quirk and have bits and pieces get learned as he matures and develops the quirk. For now I'm more than happy to go with either one at a time, or all at once with the full possession skill if that's alright? On the basis it can't be used with any other skills then, is it alright to keep Heavenly Arsenal? Happy to drop Heaven's Fury and Miracles for now. The wing weight was set at that because it includes his own weight in the sum, and as he grows larger that's going to get pretty close to his weight on its own. Maybe change it to 2.5x his body weight as a total carry weight? The angelic senses don't detect untruth, just lies, so if the statement isnt actually false it won't get picked up. As for how he knows how's to use it, he has the angel itself to teach him how to use it perhaps? They've been working together for 15 years after all. And yes, Dark Shadow was exactly what I was going for. The angel is a being which inexplicably appeared from nowhere, and while it claims to be a real angel, it can't prove it, and I don't expect or desire for the existance of divinity to be a central character point.