[quote=@Aquaknight] I will accpet this character but I will give you a few heads up~ This is a very strong quirk but I'll allow it since you are basically playing two characters so I highly advised when you do post you also write for Haniel as well, make her character and not just a tool for combat~ This is a bit of extra work for you but I hope you are fine with this~ Now onto the grading portion! *Snipped Grading* [/quote] That was the idea with Haniel, most if not all of my posts will either feature her interjecting her thoughts consistently throughout, or simply have a segment from her own perspective, depending on the situation. I'll probably expand a bit more on her personality and history on my CS before we formally start. And good to see that the changes met your standards, I'm quite enamored of Samael already, so I look forward to playing him. Did you want the grading included in the post in the characters tab as a separate hider? If so, do you mind if I reformat it a bit?