[@SilverDawn] Money, Money, Money, Mon- *ahem*... Mad props for writing the first CS to make me genuinely chuckle while reading over it, I love your aesthetic. Solid backstory, well written CS, in-canon magic? Winning combination, character approved. Feel free to post up and start working on your relationships section. [quote=@Suku] [@Lord Sawsaw2]ill be keeping the cs as is if thats ok was planning on adding more to the history but drawing blanks [/quote] That's fine, feel free to add more fluff down the line as it occurs to you. Your character is also approved for the characters tab. [quote=@pkken] *snipped CS* [/quote] Tree Merge is fine so long as casting give she away his position Chain Burst is fine as long as it's a two post spell which allows its target to act in between the snare and the activation. Same goes with Terra Clamaris. The rest of your standard spells are fine A caveat of the enchantment magic is that the living target must be willing to accept the magic. Metal Transmute is fine as long as the enchanted object also becomes as heavy as steel You'll need to nominate a radius for Hardened Surface Everything else looks fantastic! I love how much effort you've put into him!