[quote=@Kaesus] [hider=Kian] Name: Kian Flandery Appearance: Kian is what could be called an above average good looking guy, he has white, almost flawless skin, with sharp long ears and emerald green eyes. His hair is completely white, being this it's true color. He is muscular but not bulky. He favors long silk robes. [hider=Here's a Picture][center][img]https://img00.deviantart.net/87c6/i/2015/358/3/0/tera___highelf_by_chisien-d8pyvcp.jpg[/img][/center] [i][color=green][center]"I won't say looks are the most important thing in a hero, but I know they are important.[/center][/color][/i][/hider] Superhero name: Age: 16 DOB: 1st of June Weight: 78kg Height: 188cm Personality: Kian is a very charismatic and full of himself guy. Most of the time he only talks to other people if he has any benefit from it. However, he is very loyal to those who he considers his friends and is capable of anything to protect them and punish does against them. When he uses his powers he likes to play with the reality of the adversary, often trying to affect the psychological first before affecting the physical. History: Born into quirk-less parents, owners of a international rich company, Kian never had much support from his family to pursue Hero studies, for them one could be someone greater in life if they just focused in having a "normal" successful life. Never agreeing with his parents ideal, since young Kian started using his quirk on himself, making him "imagine" he was fighting strong villans that he always defeated with the use of a great variety of quirk he had inside "My World". Years passed and Kian was always the popular boy in the school, being rich and coming from a well known family everyone wanted to be his friend. Kian was never impressed by people who created the illusion they were really his friends and because of that he never had true friends in the past. Not being particularly good in any sport, he was never the jock around, but sometimes he was even more popular than them. Kian's parents were never much present due to their jobs, but he doesn't mind that because this way, he is able to make huge parties at his house which everyone enjoys. In this parties Kian is normally the center of attention, not because he wants to, but well, he's just the embodiment of a party animal. Kian decided to join the school to improve his quirk with the objective of becoming a Hero in hope to prove his parents wrong. [hider=Quirk] Quirk Name: "My World" Quirk Description: After touching a person, Kian creates a mental link between the two and he can change the perception of anything they see around them. Against people who don't know his quirk this can be really strong, Kian can make himself look as if he was invisible, make the floor look as if it was lava, pretend multiple copies of Kian are attacking the enemy etc. (Something like a "Naruto Genjutsu" but cannot damage the person unless Kian does so in the "Real World"). Quirk Weaknesses: To use his quirk to the full extent he can only affect a person at a time. He can only affect the image of the world in a radius of 100 meters from the target. If he affects two people the size of "my world" gets reduced by half. Once Kian tried to affect three people, the size of "my world" did not decress but Kian entered some type of trance and could not move. He has never tried to affect four people with "My World" at once. [/hider] [/hider] [/quote] I like this guy and his quirk, mainly because of the fact tha it balances itss elf out with its limits yet still being powerful on an unknowing enemy. Accepted [hr] [quote=@Avant] [hider=Yoshio] [b]Appearance:[/b] [img]https://orig00.deviantart.net/6ba9/f/2010/109/0/d/luis_hawk_by_meago.jpg[/img] [b]Name:[/b] Yoshio Sanzo [b]Superhero Name:[/b] [b]Age:[/b] 16 [b]D.O.B:[/b] March 30th [b]Weight:[/b] 66kg (145lbs) [b]Height:[/b] 175cm (5’9) [b]Personality:[/b] Yoshio is usually soft spoken and mild mannered. He hates to offend, he hates to interrupt, and he hates to steal the spotlight from others. He is modest and polite to a fault, and goes to great pains to ensure he speaks properly to everyone, regardless of status. He likes to solve conflicts with words rather than force, even if the conflict in question is threatening him directly. He is not so naïve as to never resort to violence, but he will hold back unless absolutely necessary. Yoshio undergoes something of a transformation when it comes to topics he is passionate about. As something of a bleeding heart and idealist, Yoshio can talk for hours on subjects such as reforming society for the better, and when he speaks on said subjects he will speak strongly, loudly, and even fiercely. He is not blind to the fact his ranting can end up being boring and even annoying, and so all it takes to make him stop is to politely ask. If he has gotten started against someone he vehemently disagrees with, on the other hand, he won’t stop no matter how much they ask him to. [b]History:[/b] Yoshio is the son of Tokuda Sanzo, a member of the House of Representatives of the Japanese National Diet. Tokuda Sanzo is well known for being a political firebrand, not only because he gives lengthy and passionate speeches on core topics, but also because his quirk allows him to spew fire from his mouth. Yoshio grew up watching his father’s speeches on t.v., as well as having his mother as a semi-successful Hero, and quickly developed a keen interest in becoming both a passionate politician as well as a hero of justice. To his youthful mind, the two were hardly incompatible. Much to a young Yoshio’s consternation, many of his friends discovered his quirk before him. Having yet to demonstrate neither his father’s fire breath nor his mother’s concussive blasts, Yoshio was beginning to become frustrated with his lack of progress. One day, he went into something of a tantrum, lamenting his quirklessness in a long and screaming rant. Upon finishing, he unleashed a wave of concussive force from his mouth that destroyed one of the walls of his house. He was both overjoyed at having finally discovered his quirk and regretful that he had caused some damage to his own house. It was of little consequence in the end, as Yoshio had his eyes set on the gleaming future that awaited him as a Hero. [hider=Quirk] [b]Quirk Name:[/b] Filibuster [b]Quirk Description:[/b] “Filibuster” operates via Yoshio building energy by speaking for varying amounts of time before unleashing the energy in a concussive blast. The longer he speaks for before discharging his energy, the more it builds up and thus the more strength lies behind the blast. Speaking for a very short period of time, for instance saying something like “Move!” or “Go away!”, will produce force equivalent to a mildly strong push. Launching into a long speech, on the other hand, could generate enough force to smash through walls and send people flying. Absurdly long rants could produce potentially devastating results, however Yoshio has yet to experiment so much with his quirk, and he may never have the opportunity. The quirk relies on speaking loudly and clearly, so speaking in a soft tone would produce no energy. The range of his concussive blasts varies, with weaker ones travelling the width of a modest room, and stronger ones being carried across several blocks. Their strength is also affected by their travel time, operating on a sort of “shotgun” effect, meaning they are strongest when first released but dissipate as they travel. [b]Quirk Weaknesses:[/b] The most obvious weakness of “Filibuster” is that it relies entirely upon Yoshio’s ability to speak, which if disruptive would render him effectively quirkless. If Yoshio were in the middle of building up energy and was interrupted by any means, he would be forced to discharge the energy regardless of his will, which may result in unfortunate consequences for both himself or anyone or anything nearby. His quirk also lacks subtlety, requiring a certain degree of noise even to begin using it, and thus making it worthless to someone attempting to attack without being seen, although it could be useful against somebody that doesn’t know how it works. Extensive use of his quirk will leave Yoshio with a severely sore throat, making him incapable of using it again until his throat heals. [/hider] [b]Other:[/b] (I want to freely admit that I’ve never been good at gauging “fair” limits on powers in RPs, especially as everyone and their dog has a different opinion on the matter. If anyone wants extremely specific but also reasonable definitions on things like time, range and other such concerns, I would ask that they be given to me, rather than having me sit here and guess at what would be reasonable until I hit the magic number.) [/hider] [/quote] (To be fair, limits vary depending on the scope of the ability. At least thats how I judge it.) Characters Quirk is pretty well defined and I also like the Character. Kinda reminds me of [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/bokunoheroacademia/images/f/f1/Voice.gif/revision/latest?cb=20171112161127[/img] But it happens at the end instead of during and with that beng said he is also accepted. [quote=@Weed] [hider=CS] Appearance:[img]http://pre00.deviantart.net/b716/th/pre/f/2013/237/9/4/fisheye_placebo__outfit_design_by_yuumei-d6jo2cu.jpg[/img] Name: Vincent Tiem Superhero Name: Age: 15 D.O.B: July 18th Weight: 110 lbs Height: 5'5 Personality: Vincent is rather carefree and quite lazy due to his powers. Luckily due to his age his metabolism is rather high or else he would be an over weight slob. Vincent loses interest things rather quickly due to having difficulty finding any challenge in them. Not particularly liking the idea of being bored and lazy he tries to create challenges that are usually quite dangerous. History: Vincent had a normal childhood for the most part. Both his mother and father had minor quirks that didn't really help except in specific situations so they have normal jobs and have no aspirations of their past dreams of being heroes. Vincent's parents were quite proud of him when he displayed such a strong and versatile power and thought that he would of course fulfill their dreams of being a hero so they can live vicariously through his adventures. Though they quickly realized that their overt enthusiasm of him being a hero ended up turning him off of the idea when he turned 8 and started to become very lazy and simply using his power to cut corners. It was one day that changed his lazy life. He had found himself walking at night when he heard the scream from an alleyway. He linked his portal and sstuck his head through as he peered into the alleyway. He saw a group guys cornered a young woman they each had quirks. Vincent pulled his head back and brought the destination portal down to ground level and stepped through. He didn't feel any particular need to save the woman, he more than anything saw these guys as a challenge. With some well placed portal he ended up hit and kicking each of them in the balls and used the portal to pull the woman through to where he was. She then ran off and he ported away down the street leaving them there. Vincent's heart was pounding. He had won, but he knew full well that he was scared out of his mind. His heart was beating in his chest and felt it was going to explode. He had gotten lucky due to his surprise appearance as well as his unpredictable power. He decided he had to train both his mind and body to be prepared for other future challenges, because even though he was lazy, Vincent never wanted to run away in fear again. Vincent started travelling the town at night while his parents were sleeping. It's not like it was hard for him to get out. One night ended up portaling to the other side of town and just running along rooftops of buildings using his ability to cover further distances when his athleticism would not allow him to make it. His body had become covered with lean, flexible muscles. The night walks had gotten boring and Vincent had gotten bored once again. It was during the day when he witnessed a man stealing a woman's purse. His lips stretched into a smirk as he pursued the thief via his portals. In the end he caught the thief and returned the purse. Though he got praised it was more the thrill that he enjoyed. When Vincent was younger he stole items using his power and never got caught or suspected which became boring so he quit stealing. But going against criminals with quirks was exactly what he was looking for. He would become a hero and fight villains to prove to all that his quirk was the best. At least he wouldn't be bored, right? [hider=Quirk] Quirk Name: Spots Quirk Description: Vincent can create 3 portals. 2 of the 3 portals are directly linked to automatically connect two points in space together. The 3rd portal is known simply as his "pocket" which is an extra-dimensional space that he currently uses for storage and to spend time alone in. The extra dimensional pocket is 20ft x 20ft x 20ft. Quirk Weaknesses Creating portals is almost instantaneous but the destination portal is very tricky to work out if Vincent hasn't figured out ahead of time where he wants to put it. In a sense he can't really use the destination portal effectively in live combat despite the fact that he has practiced on his own but still not able to do it. Also his distination portal is limited to places that Vincent can see or a place that he can clearly imagine otherwise the destination portal doesn't connect. If the Entrance and Destination portals aren't connected then it doesn't work and Vincent or anyone else goes right through the whole. [/hider] Other: He connects his portals to allow him to attack from unseen angles, travel from point A to point B almost instantaneously, he even believes he kill an individual by closing the portals while someone is not fully through. He can also use his "pocket" to hold people like a prison. [/hider] [/quote] Right, So The idea of quantum tunneling is fine mostly because of the fact he has to move people across portals and a villian could also abuse an open portal to follow them. However to include a large pocket dimension with that seems a little too much. Therefore I only really suggest either a large downscale of the pocket dimensions size or that its removed. Since this quirk is pretty powerful for getting around anyway.