[quote=@Renny]
Alright so this is how I'll do this; I'm going to hit you with a list. Beside each bullet with be (+) or (-); positive or negative. I'm not one for going into details, especially when it comes to someone else's character sheet. I find it hindering to the creative process. The only time I'll go into detail is if there is something I have an absolute problem with. So let's begin. 

[@OneStoryToMany] [list][*] ([b]+[/b]) I like the profile overall. You're definitely in the acceptable range. 
[*] ([b]+[/b]) Your Nen ability is simple but powerful. Makes sense for an Enhancer. 
[*] ([b]-[/b]) Birdy's baptism by Nen is a tad iffy to me. I'm willing to let it slide, why not. Hunters are extremely rare. I think it was mentioned that out of all of its population there were only 661. Nen Users are around the same, maybe more, it would rare for them to know the [b]truth[/b] of the concept. If not Hunters or Masters in their own right I think her skill would be greatly diminished. I'm skeptical of her being hit by a Nen User in the mafia and surviving at all, unless she was amongst a battle involving weak Mafiosos. Seems more likely. Very, very dangerous but plausible.[/list]

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I agree,  I definitely hand-waved the accident. Frankly,  there weren't many reasonable ways I could think of to have a character I wanted at the age I wanted without either a baptism that was mostly harmless,  all things considered,  or was a genius who rivaled Gon/Killua and that just seemed unlikely to me [i]shrugs shoulders[/i] So I went that route. If the baptism bothers you I can alter the situation some.  Change ages and whatnot.  I kind of like the baptism part,  but thereare more realistic routes I can take if you'd like?