For the most part everything looks good. However, I just now realized that I completely spaced and didn't mention an important part of the RP and you'll likely need to make slight adjustments to your Character. 

Calypso Major is uninhabited. Everyone will be arriving at the planet around the same time via colony ship and will have to establish a new settlement. Each character will be arriving on the planet with a large group of settlers and plenty of supplies.

The exact reason for your character coming to the planet is up to you. Perhaps you're coming for new resources for your company. Perhaps your setting up a military outpost for your nation. Maybe you're a hippy and are setting up a commune with like minded people. It's up to you.

I apologize deeply for the misunderstanding and for not making that clear. I've gone through and added a paragraph before the CS to clarify that.