[@Blackstripe][@Blazion][@Alfhedil]

Alright, think I've got most of it down now. Might tweak the backstory a bit later to clean it up and describe how Malcolm actually starts cracking heads with a lead pipe, but it should be complete enough to work with for now.

Anything stick out that I should change up? It came out a bit... [i]edgier[/i] and overly-dramatic than I intended. <_<  

Edit: Redid the ending on my lunch break. Probably give it another facelift when I get home.