[quote=@Savo]
[@Lord Sawsaw2] gotcha, but if you wouldn't mind, mind pointing out where I made these mistakes? I want to try and correct them as soon as possible.
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In Personality: 
"...certain rules, he is [color=ed1c24]an[/color] extremely free..."

In History:
"...had a huge amount of mages that appeared [color=ed1c24][s]between pure professionalism to those who appeared[/s][/color] to be able to handle themselves relatively well."

In Spells:
Yarn Grenade "...entangling the opponent or their [color=ed1c24]?when?[/color] in a sea of string.
Intertwined Mimic "...significantly weakening him [color=ed1c24]for[/color] a couple of minutes..."
Silk and Serenity "...Absorbing clothes or string created by [color=ed1c24]??? [/color](including ones..."

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[@Spanner] Those changes are fine. You're approved to post up in the Characters tab.

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Edit: Also, [@Savo], your relationships are looking good so far. The ones for Arianna and Illedrith are perfectly fine.