I've gotten feedback from Saw and I've sent them back a refined copy of the bio. Until Saw comes back on I don't know if anything else needs changing, but progress is being made very quickly, and I should have it posted sooner rather than later. Unless something comes up that complicates things.

As a sneak peek, [url=https://i.pinimg.com/736x/30/8a/f2/308af26521b731c6a1b152904db1bfa1--fantasy-artwork-female-art.jpg]here[/url] is one of the armor/weapon sets my character will have. This will be her only magical set to start with. The effects will be a bit complicated to explain outside of the bio, so I guess you'll just have to wait and see what it does later when I post the full CS.