[quote=@SleepingSilence]
No one else would be attacked by multiple people over saying, we all make mistakes, just take roleplaying critique to heart. By anyone else. Not that I'm already well aware of that too.
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To be frank its the tone of your writing, that is upsetting people.  

Did you notice that nobody else writes with your tone.

Everyone else's tone is alot more polite and helpful than your own.