[@LordVoldemort] Accepted, but I would specify why/how Jin comes into Dramon's service.

[@Wick] Like Volde stated, your image doesn't work. It's saying that the image no longer exists.

There are a handful of things to be fixed in your CS, so please don't take this personally.

1) [b]Shortness of CS:[/b] while I don't necessarily care about short CSes, I feel like this is too short and there are things that should be more detailed than they already are. How is she "funny"? What does it mean to be "one of the guys"? How did she study the blade, and how long did it take? There are more things to be said, but I feel like you get the point.

2) [b]Weapons:[/b] As an assassin, there's no reason she should be carrying two big swords [i]and[/i] knives. Assassins are supposed to be staying out of sight when they're on duty, so how exactly is she supposed to be quiet while lugging a big sword around? Also, the last sentence is a little god-moddy; there's absolutely no way a person "never misses". Even deadshots miss sometimes. In order to fix these things, I would just have her stick to knives/daggers.

3) [b]Personality:[/b] You say she drinks and is funny, but she's serious. That's a contradiction that you should fix.

4) [b]Bio:[/b] There is no way a large group of mages should be wandering around Avalon, much less one that attacks a village and slaughters people without a huge reason. Ivorytower (one word, not two) doesn't have assassins. If you want her to be a mage-hunter instead, then go ahead, but note that mage-hunters work under the churches of the Creator and strictly adhere to rules set by Ivorytower.