[quote=@AcetheKidd]
I like the plot! But I'm slightly confused by it.  Who's the "villian " and the "hero"? 

I'm terrible at explaining things,  I can't really tell you why I'm kinda confused umu mind explaining the plot more?
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Sure!

Our characters are the heroes. Our job is to stop Caradras from destroying all humanity.

Caradras is designed to be a tough villain. He's not the "Muah ha ha, I'm so evil and I love it" sort of villain - he actually believes in his cause, and he'll put up a fight. He'll try to murder the protagonists, not because he just loves killing people, but because he genuinely thinks it's the right thing to do. By being both strong and conscientious, he poses an incredible threat. He may not be the hero of our story, but he's the hero of HIS story, and from what I've read, that's what makes a compelling villain.

He's actually my first foray into handling such a strong villain, so wish me luck!