[@Garth] Again, I'm going over your sheet in an in-depth fashion, so please don't take this personally. [b]1. Magic and Weapons:[/b] The OP says you can't have magic [i]and[/i] weapons since it's very, very rare, and that's only with magic and a sword. Imagine magic with a mace, a shield, and a sling? Not to mention, knowing magic makes you a mage and... well, mages are looked down upon, so I think it'll be best if you just make him someone with a weapon and knows how to fight rather than giving him magic. Maybe he just knows how to heal wounds through salves and potions rather than magic? [b]2. His appearance:[/b] the picture doesn't really tell us how he looks like. In fact, he looks much older than 22 in the picture, and that's probably because of the cowl/robe thing. If you can't find a picture of his face, you can describe it through words. [b]3. Specification:[/b] We don't really know how he's like in personality other than he's friendly and he used to be arrogant, but now he looks at peasants with a drive to protect. His history doesn't really reveal a lot about him either. Why is it his duty to serve the church? What skirmishes has he fought in? I feel like there should be more, you get what I'm saying? Other than that, he's a pretty interesting character.