[@Shard]I really like it and the effort you put into it! The only problem here is probably on my part. 
I failed to make it clear that you don't really join the Judas-Unit. If they see potential or a way to control you they will basically forcefully recruit you and allow you to live. So perhaps a little story how they made Corvo join his ranks and/or can control him.

P.S: I love Vampire the Masquerade! I used to play a Nosferatu Artthief for a long time :dreamy