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[@Emma] Like I said with Goat, the only catalyst that's viable for a mage is their own tome. 

It's likely that a woman wouldn't look pregnant while carrying one baby, but two is pretty unlikely... maybe dial it down to how long into the pregnancy Leda found out she was pregnant?

When Jaz was ill, maybe tone down her disease; even in medieval fantasy, contracting pneumonia was basically a death sentence, cause that means they'd have to drain the water out of the lung and that's hard to treat even today. A fever or even the flu is deadly enough for her, I think.

Why does she believe in the False Gods more than the Creator? Believing them instead of the Creator is like believing in Satan or one of those weird golden cow idols than God or Allah or any other "major" and "good" god. I don't mind it if she does, but I feel like there should be a reason [i]why[/i] she does.

Like with the other characters, how does she come into Dramon's service? Since they're all going south and all.


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Ok good to know. I didn’t read through everyone’s critics sooooo. 

Pregnancy thing is possible just FYI. Most of my family on my fathers side didn’t look at all pregnant till about seven months. But I’ll change it since the significance of that part of the bio is nothing. 

Changing the sickness to the flu also. Again the sickness thing I’m basing off real life experience as my mother’s side of the family is mostly Christian Science and don’t go to the doctor or use medicine. 

As for her minuscule belief in the false gods. According to religious philosophy in this RP world (from what I understand) they were the ones that bestowed magic as a blessing, and are ultimately the ones who cursed the apostates with demons and corruption. With the new religion, and the Creator God made the new [i]true[/i] god, mages became shunned and hunted. I don’t know if I’m getting across what I mean... Also I saw the Creator religion as kind of like Christianity, and the false gods religion as pagan religions like Norse or ancient Greek myth. I didn't see it as the false gods being the Satan character to the Creator who is the god/Jesus character. am I making sense?  Lol