BTW [@Traps] do you mind if I leave my sheet in its existing format? I'm finishing up the edits right now, or at least trying to. Kinda braindead with crunch week upon me ... and working late at night because spent three hours earlier working on a damn project.

TBH it'd be a pain to reformat it to the template so it is actually the difference between Sam being ready for a formal critique tonight versus it possibly being until friday AM (my AM, evidently not yours).

[b]EDIT:[/b] Actual lore question. I currently make reference to the "Agartha gate" as if the passageway between the known world and the new world has been carved into a proper high-traffic passageway rather than an old windy cave still (this would make sense to be done as permanent human settlement becomes a priority). [i]Is this a remotely reasonable assumption to make or do you want me to nix that choice of phrasing?[/i]

[b]EDIT 2:[/b] The [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/16aG7YidQJzaObAvSMGSkS8RYxX0pOT8zeM9yEm9mo2Y/edit?usp=sharing]same link[/url] as before works, and I think I've finished all the minor edits to ensure lore compatibility. It should be good for a proper critique I hope. Let me know if you catch any lore issues I may have missed.