[@Rune_Alchemist]
For the most part, everything is looking a lot better. The only thing left is that we would like to see a better explanation within the bio of how and why she got her cybernetics because the cybernetics are a main part of her (literally a part of her) and who she is. It shouldn't really be something just glossed over because cybernetics would be quite life-changing. That is the only thing we are asking to be added now. After that, you should be good. Thank you for being patient with us.