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[@RoccanIronclad] A few problems. The first is that you reverence Djinn society. I don't think such a thing would be fitting for the setting since a species that is hunted every hour of the day could not really build a society. Also Djinns have parents? Another thing is that he would attack anyone that would disrespect his race, if that would be the case he would be dead within minutes considering every knight would call him an abomination from the pits of hell. I think you made him a bit too much like a human with some superpowers. The last thing is that the leader of The Knights is far too busy to deal with individual cases so you can just make up another lower ranking member of the Order as the man/woman who bound him. I hope I don't sound too harsh :hmm.

[@Tass] I really like your take on the Golem and honestly don't have any problem with the char! You can move her to the Character tab.

[@Shard] I like how active you are :lol. I like the char but you have to consider he is a closeted gay, demonic boy in a organization that considers both to be abominations I also like the familiar also they both will have a hard time and not many freedoms. Accepted!

[@T Risket] I actually laughed at the part you wrote about him not being a missing link :golfclap. I really enjoy the character and can see him fitting in quite well! Accepted!

[@Loki Odinson] Sure I am looking forward to your char!

[@Yuria] I really like the char. Definitely the darkest one yet. I am guessing Nahash is an ancient demon or spirit of sorts? Either way accepted!

[@NewShoesForever] This character fits much more! I am just not sure whether his background as a CEO would it. The Order does not let the members of the Judas Unit leave without permission so running a company would not be possibly or even allowed. 

@everyone Did I miss something or anymore questions?