[quote=@Geyter]
[@Saarebas] Loving Amos, just a bit skeptical on the whole skeletal constructs. I say pick either that or the noxious gas. If you really wanna keep both, probably nerf them. Maybe just isolating the transformations to his arms would be a good example.

[@AlternateMan] Aside from needing to clean up the sheet, I find no real problem. Just curious about the constructs that he can make. You mentioned something about complex constructs? Maybe you could give an example of simple and complex ones for me just so I can get a better understanding on what it is he can make?
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If I may add my two cents, I think the noxious gas is frankly far more useful and versatile than having skelly-bones, and giving Amos’ gaseous form the ability to physically attack people while still being mostly incorporeal feels ( a ) unnecessary since the gas itself is already a form of attack that can’t be blocked or dodged like a skeleton punch, and ( b ) a detriment to Amos’ own creativity. Making such a brute force method for subduing opponents available on a power with as many interesting yet subtle applications as turning into gas seems like a good way for Amos to develop an unintentional crutch.

Also, feel free to ignore this if it’s a stylistic choice but anyone who wants to give their character a full Japanese name or surname (since we can probably assume this isn’t a class made up of 90% transfer students) but doesn’t know how to read/speak/write moon runes can use this random name generator I’m fond of:

https://www.behindthename.com/random/

It’s one of the best I’ve found imo, and you can just as easily use it to create ordinary-sounding names as you can the pun-filled and overtly-symbolic names series like BnHA are usually known for.

Also, did you get a chance to look at my WIP, [@Geyter]? It’s mostly finished by now, though I still need to add a lot of the cosmetic touches.