[@Syn] Without reading the background([i]holyshit that background section though[/i]) I can only really comment on the part about Desmond and the Compel. I [i]think[/i] we discussed a bit about that in the GM PM regarding genetic immunity and how we felt it more down to mental willpower, though unsure if that was communicated back to you. Overall it's a pretty hefty CS and I like what I was able to read through. It's nice to see a vampire who's not all refinement and posh, one who skirts the line that separates man from monster. Interested to see him in action personally.

Other than that, I saw a part in there where you mention Ambrosia under the limitations that should probably say Desmond :v

[@Queentze] Looks good to me, so unless Lion has something to say about it I think you're in the clear to add him to the characters tab.