You're fine. 
The post looks good.
I can easily do a nice transition to next day or something.
I can work with it :)

And nice.
Yeah, I have a writing group (a friend and I lol) and we submit some of our personal work to get another set of eyes on it.
That's always pretty good. Nice to get another opinion and all. :)
I take it, you do a lot of writing and such? 
Do you enjoying editing?


Yes Data is a bit intriguing. Almost childlike wonder and a desire to be human. 
He's pretty cool. It will be fun exploring the personalities a bit more.