[@AtomicNut] looking it over I have a few points that give me pause. Nothing to big just a few little comments that would either need explanation or a small change.

-first the elves themselves were more based off the Warhammer wood elves, defenders of the wilderness and a bit brutal in their efforts. Now I could see some being tricksters but as a whole brutal murderers (if you enter their forest)

-second I don't really see much room for growth in the character. You already have a wide array of skills and magic that I don't know where else you would grow (granted you have probably trained longer than Jing has been alive)

-third being a current member of the irregulars could be difficult as the battle has already started, this could be remedied with saying Jing had sent you ahead and you were to meet back up with the group at our current regroup point.

And finally you forgot one bit. (Check the rules)