[@Gummy1295]

Alrighty. Guess it is time for the first official review. 

[quote]Shortly after his eleventh birthday, his father was chosen to represent the Thompson family in the fourth battle for the 726th Holy Grail, only to be killed in the process. 
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Unfortunately there are certain canon that has been formed here that is infallible, and the fourth grail war had been decided already within this altered version of canon. 

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Origin: "Knowledge"

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This isn't really an origin per se. Origins are something along the lines of Lio Shirazumi's Consumption, Emiya Shirou's Sword, and Cornelius Alba's Refutation. It is what your character had taken from the Akashic Records. In other words, the primordial existence of your character. 

[quote]Elemental Affinity: Void and Fire.
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1) I don't suggest knowing Void, since I am not sure about your level of comprehension to the skill and people tend to just kill themselves without the proper knowledge of the magic system 
2) You have neither fire or void as a listed magical system in the magecraft section, so one would imagine that you are not able to apply your magecraft.  



[quote]Magecraft: ... Eye of the Mind (True) [Useless under the effects of anger] 
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People are not just walking around with Eye of the Mind. How does your character have this skill? 

[quote]Magecraft: ... Enhanced Memory [/quote]

This isnt a system of magecraft I am aware of, or a spell even. Perhaps an explanation would be nice. But from my perspective this seems to be the sort of thing that belongs in "skills" rather than magecraft. 

 
[quote]Equipment: Magic Tomes
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What do these tomes contain? Are they mystic codes? What can they do? Can your character use tomes? 

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[quote=@HappyTurtle]
Can I play the sekai de ichiban tsuyoi dakara!? :o

Just think about, an Assassin-class Heracles with God Hand and Nine Lives plus Presence Concealment.

That shit be OP af.
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Heracles is banned from any class that isn't a Berserker due to information revealed in Strange Fake that 1) doesn't provide an individual with the full picture of his abilities and 2) balancing issues. Though if you did summon Heracles as a Berserker, I will warn you that it will not be pretty for a Master, even of the highest order.