[@Bishop]

Yeah sorry, I figured that might be a bit of an issue, but I wanted to the first posts to be more about introducing your character. Make their interactions to the world around them unique. It doesn't necessarily have to be two paragraphs, but give us a sense of why your character is looking to find Dantel. How do they feel about Caracas? About the Bull Pits? Then make them try and scout him out. Remember you're just looking for him right now, no need to chase him down. Maybe your character is particularly perceptive? (in which case you can message me asking what your character might notice) 

This preliminary series of posts is just a vehicle for learning to understand your character and their motivations.