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Yeah, the whole idea of making a Caster out of a not-so-popular mathematical figure who's only about 250 years old didn't seem to fly with me, especially considering the other submissions on this thread. I needed to kick it up a notch, so I decided to submit for a Lancer slot instead—someone much closer to home, if you get the idea.


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Name: Agüeybana

Class: Lancer

Gender: Female

Appearance: [img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/bd/79/c3/bd79c3efe5fe4ab723b797fd6063cfb4.jpg[/img]

Alignment: Lawful Good

Personality: Kind-hearted, humble, and honorable. Dislikes unnecessary conflict, but she's too quick to place her trust on those who claim to be allies.

History: Agüeybana, whose name translates to "The Great Sun" is the most powerful of the Taino caciques, essentially ruling over the entirety of the island of Boring (Known today as Puerto Rico, following the island's colonization by the Spaniards). Upon the arrival of Christopher Columbus in the year 1493, she greeted the incoming foreigners and accepted them into her tribe. The two clans managed to keep a short-lived, yet close, friendship, only to later be betrayed by the more technologically advanced Spaniards, who forced Agüeybana and her people into slavery. Eventually, the Taino tribe as a whole decided to rebel against the Spanish army and fought a climactic battle against them, with Agüeybana leading the charge. During this skirmish, Agüeybana was struck by a rifleman's bullet and died shortly after from the resulting injury.

Weapons: 

Stone Spear ~ Essentially a rudimentary Lance made by binding a sharpened stone to a sturdy enough wooden shaft. Deals bonus damage against animals and beasts, but is inherently ineffective against most types of armors.

Atlatl ~ A primitive long range weapon that launches Spears with much greater speed and distance than a regular javelin.

Parameters:

STR: C
CON: B
AGI: B
MGI: D
LCK: E

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance - D+: Under normal circumstances, Lancer only has enough Resistance to cancel Single-Action spells. However her Protection from the Wind skill boosts this rank to A when a Wind-Elemental spell targets her.

Personal Skills:

Charisma - B: Lancer was able to watch over the entire island's worth of tribes with little to no conflicts, and successfully managed to unite thousands of able-bodied warriors in a rebellion against an enemy army despite being at a clear disadvantage.

Warrior of the Forest - A: Lancer spent her entire life learning how to hunt prey in the dense rainforest environment of El Yunque. Her senses are drastically boosted while in similar environments, and she receives a buff in AGI when climbing trees.

Protection from Wind - A: A blessing from the Taino deity Yukino, given to Lancer in order to counter the powerful storms brought by the evil good Juracán. At this rank, no living magus is capable of fazing Lancer with any sort of Wind Elemental magic.

Noble Phantasm:

Sleeping Giant's Spear ~ Yúcahu Bauga Maórocoti

Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Fortress
Range: 1/2-50
Maximum number of targets: 1/50

Description: A blessed spear used for religious ceremonies, with a shaft carved from the Maga tree and a spearhead carved from a holy stone artifact. Agüeybana brought this spear to the battlefield during the Tainos' climactic clash against the Spanish conquistador Ponce de Leon and his army.

As a Noble Phantasm, this spear can manifest itself by having Lancer's Stone Spear transfigured into its true form. While in this state, the spear grants Lancer the ability to ignore any armor or shielding that the target Servant has equipped, essentially forcing the target to defend while only taking his/her innate CON parameter into account.

This Noble Phantasm can also be used in conjunction with Lancer's Atlatl. If Lancer were to launch the spear in its true form using the Atlatl, the Lance will obtain the properties of a magical explosive, with the spear violently releasing all of its concentrated mana in the form of an explosion, with the spear at the epicenter.

Immediately afterwards, this Noble Phantasm will revert to its original state as a Stone Spear, and must be either recalled with Magecraft from Lancer's Master or picked up from wherever it could have landed. Lancer must then wait until her mana is restored back to its maximum level before the transfiguration can be repeated. 
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(EDIT: Fixed the parameters and skills at the GM's request. The description for Lancer's Noble Phantasm has been completely rewritten to suit her origin story a little better. As of the moment I'm writing this footnote, I am ready to submit this sheet for review.)

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Bumping this. I am under the impression that the GMs still haven't reviewed this revised sheet for Lancer/Agueybana while newer Servant sheets have been reviewed and approved. You must have missed my earlier post...