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Name: Jaune Arc
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: Juane stands at 6'1" with scraggly blond hair and a thin build. He wears white plate armor with gold trim over thick, black clothes. His boots are a simple pair of hard leather. On his left hip, he carries a steel sheath which he can unhook and fold out into a shield. Institute the sheath is a longsword.
Personality: Jaune is an outgoing, goofy and all-around friendly person. He treats people equally and has no problems expressing himself to strangers and bonds with them easily, showing a lot of confidence. When faced with entirely new social situations, Jaune’s confidence leads to bold behavior. This can become out of hand and backfire when pursuing romance. 
Brief Backstory: Jaune was brought up in a large, middle class family. His weapons and armor were passed down from his great-great-grandfather from his time in the war.
Equipment: Plate armor, collapsible shield/sheath, longsword.
Skills: Basic swordplay.