[@Jangel13] [quote]Class: Saber[/quote] Justify qualification for the class. We have two sheets currently in contention for the remaining Saber slot, so your odds of getting in are low. [quote] STR: S [/quote] S is not a rank. [quote]CON: A AGI: A MGI: B LCK: C[/quote] Please justify parameters of this level. [quote]Class Skills: Saber class abilities allow him to use his dragon blade to destroy his enemies in a spectacular fashion. He has the ability to summon his dragon spirit to help him in a fight.[/quote] These are not Class Skills. [quote]Personal Skills: Certain abilities a Heroic Spirit may have, such as Charisma, Artistic Talent, etc. Keep close to the legend; modifiers are temporary rank ups, not a rating of how good it is. Limit of three.[/quote] This is empty. This should not be empty. [quote]Noble Phantasm(s): Able to use his sword to summon a blue flame dragon to his aid aiming it at his enemy to destroy them. Name: Fire of Ōshu Title: Wrath of the one eyed dragon! Rank: EX NP Type: Anti-Army Range: 3 Maximum Number of Targets: 100 Description: Summons a dragon from his sword that comes out of his sword and appears by his side. The dragon is dark blue and made from blue fire and stands 3 stories tall and roars as it stands next to Date. When he summons it and says "go Wrath of the one eyed Dragon!" and he thrusts his sword forward and the dragon strikes straight through destroying any enemies in its path that are unable to block it or dodge it. [/quote] Why does having a title with the word "dragon" in it give him an EX-ranked Noble Phantasm where he summons a dragon? On the whole, I will be blunt in saying that this sheet baffles me. Very serious revision will need to be undergone before it is properly eligible for consideration.