[@Lauder] That looks good! The only piece of advice I have for you is to think about boss fights where there might not be anyone to use it on (Boss battles are typically where D-Abilities see most of their use.) If you're not concerned with that then great!

[@AlternateMan] This is looking good so far. I would advise you to take a look at your damage percentages. 20% and 50% won't be doing much damage output – I know the character is a tank, but just something to consider. I will go through and edit MP Costs and stats and such as we get closer to actual posting. For your character, please tag on (Shieldbearer) after the flavor text for your character's profession. This will denote that your character gets an additional equipment slot specifically for the shield. I'd also like a little more clarity with the S-Ability. I understand the less damage from sides that are not directly behind, but not the second half – it looks like there's a clause missing.