Just got back from having steak at a restaurant, so my reviews are finally here. [@Inmento Riku] 1) Needs to be a spoiler. 2) May suggest breaking apart the rest of the sections like you did with the bottom half of the sheet for easier readability. 3) Needs another paragraph on the biography. [hr] [@PitxGirl93] 1) Skills need to expanded to at least 5 pre-apocalypse and 5 post-apocalypse. 2) Spotted a coding error in the likes and dislikes. [hr] [@Lord Orgasmo] To answer your question, middle of 2012. Used [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3y37gL5irs]this video[/url] to calculate time. So like July or sometime around there. [hr] [@Raddum] 1) Skills need to expanded to at least 5 pre-apocalypse and 5 post-apocalypse. [hr] [@Tera] Sounds good. I plan to make an Asian myself to fill the whole "Asian tourist" sterotype. [hr] [@RumikoOhara] 1) Pistol needs a number for how many rounds it has. 2) Skills need to expanded to at least 5 pre-apocalypse and 5 post-apocalypse. 3) Biography can be expanded a bit more. [hr] [@Caelum] Works for me. I don't mind military reservists, I just don't want people toting around fully automatic assault rifles just because they were in the military. I want this to be like the first few seasons of the Walking Dead before people were being mowed down left and right. [hr] [@Sh1nya] Take your time. It'll be awhile for me to put up the OOC, seeing that is nearly Christmas. [hr] [@Grim] Looking forward to it, Coolguy McBadass.