[@EpicKDP]

Your CS is not uncomfortable, but it's hard to understand. There's so many grammar errors all over it that it's next to impossible to make sense of anything you wrote.

First, the image is not working. You can either fix that or give us a text description.

Second, that set of powers/skills is very weird and has no synchrony at all. Being able to fix any computer or machine in the modern world is way too advanced for someone who is supposed to be a student. It's an incredibly unrealistic skill given how fast the technology evolves and how hard it's to understand either of them (computers or machines). To make it even more unrealistic, you tossed plant magic and knowledge of botany on top of being a gadgeteer. That just doesn't make sense.

I'll ask you to choose between one of the three powers/skills (computers, machines, or plants) and then regulate it to a level compatible with your character's age.

Third, using terms like "status changers" further breaks the already thin suspension of disbelief of your CS. The world is not a videogame; avoid that.

Fourth, and last, what is happening on that sample post? It's too random to the point that I can't comprehend anything you tried to to do there.

Just to be clear, we are not taking in any piece of writing without the least quality control. I suggest you correct the grammar errors, expand it and make your message clear. Then we will evaluate your CS again.

I hope that this information was useful.