Lol it’s fine.  The sample writing was a bit too cryptic.  I was trying to get this out while I had time and rushed it.  I did it all on my phone because I have no WiFi where I am.  I work on a boat and using data for a hotspot doesnt always help if the signal is bad to begin with.  So that’s why the frantically errors are so prevalent.  I am still kinda new here so it I don’t know what I can get away with.  I also went big for my character because I would rather be realed in than not go far enough.  If you know what I’m saying. 

The writing sample is about Reggie and his first high.  I just wanted to desguise it as a woman because marijuana is often referred to as Mary Jane.  

Thanks though I have role played before but every GM is different .