So, I think the hardest thing for most people is settling on a concept. You're basically summarizing a world that you're not even going to use lol. I had to brainstorm one for a few days, but I finally settled on one. It's going to be a video game sci-fi fighter type with mecha pilots fighting an alien menace. I'll post up a CS soon and if you think you might be interested in jumping aboard the same video game bandwagon, then let me know in PMs. We can work on character relations and such. But yeah, I'll have the CS up soon for you to view. [hider=WIP][center][img]http://txt-dynamic.cdn.1001fonts.net/txt/dHRmLjg4LjU5Y2IyMC5SVWxFVDB4UFRnLCwuMAAA/aliens-cows.regular.png[/img][/center] [center][hider=Video Game Opening Theme][youtube]https://youtu.be/A2SdzTYVeSs[/youtube][/hider][/center] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/QatHtA4.png[/img][/center] [b]Full Name:[/b] Commander Odrin Starshield [b]Age:[/b] Twenties [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Height:[/b] 5’10” [b]Weight:[/b] 172 lbs. [b]Hair Color:[/b] His hair color is stark-white, having lost pigmentation from the stress endured while being experimented on. [b]Eye Color:[/b] Grey [b]Personality:[/b] Odrin has a disciplined mannerism. He is respectful and chooses to be the better man. He won’t resort to pointless arguing or name-calling. He instead chooses to tactfully end or steer a conversation back on track. He is very assertive for he is used to giving orders. As lawful and orderly as he seems to appear, he can actually be quite insubordinate, especially when he makes his own decisions, which he feels are right. His character description has him being brave and risk-taking, diving into a fight even if the odds are against him just to see if he can defy them. He likes his relaxation time for he doesn’t get enough personal time trying to defend Earth 001 from destruction. Hot baths, comfortable beds, literally lazying about are his favorite things to do. Sometimes he just wants to unwind! Therefore, he is all for experiencing new things whether it be exotic food, parks, beaches, etc. [b]Motivation:[/b] Odrin wants to find his god so that he can learn more about his role in his world. He also secretly wants to gaze into its future (a.k.a. play the game). [b]Main Weapon:[/b] Goliath; a giant mechanized robot designed to bring annihilation to The Menace. It is Odrin who powers the machine and controls all of its functions through a unique Metalloid synchronization. [b]Battle Dress:[/b] Odrin is always wearing his exosuit and will never take it off. The suit allows him to regulate his power. Without his suit, Odrin could release enough destructive energy to cause a meltdown and incinerate an entire city block. It is this power that he uses to power the Goliath. [b]Special Abilities/Techniques:[/b] [list][*][b]Cosmic Shower (Goliath)[/b] – Goliath slams down its shield and 12 panels containing 10 zeal missile silos release 120 homing missiles upon the lock-on target. Each missile has a blast radius of 50 meters. [*][b]Gamma Ray (Goliath)[/b] – The cannon mounted on Goliath’s right shoulder will shoot a lengthy red beam of concentrated zeal. The beam can reach 200 meters and is so hot that it can slice through a Menace destroyer (or an aircraft carrier to give a visible comparison). [*][b]Aegis (Goliath)[/b] – The shield bubble that encapsulates Goliath. The shield is the first line of defense before Goliath is forced to use its actual shield to absorb attacks. It can tank conventional weapons fire in the creator’s home world, but it is vulnerable to the attacks of other creations. [*][b]Sync (Goliath & Odrin)[/b] – The Goliath doesn’t have its own personality. Odrin becomes Goliath when he plugs himself into the colossus. He sees what it sees and he controls the entire machine as though it were his own body. The energy Odrin exudes powers the suit as its life force. His military self-defense, strategies, and reactions can be freely executed. As an organic machine, Odrin’s systems cannot be corrupted or hacked through cybernetic means. It would be like trying to hack a human being through a computer. Thus making Metalloids a formidable force.[/list] [b]Backstory:[/b] Commander Odrin comes from the video game “Eidolon.” Eidolon is a mecha fighting game about a science fiction Earth deemed Earth 001 that is invaded by a destructive race of grotesque aliens called The Menace. The Menace are known to assimilate other species like a virus. In order to combat the threat, the United Earth Coalition comprised of a united military front have developed the first biological machines called Metalloids. Because the Metalloids are comprised of an organic metal compound, the virus cannot infect them and therefore, the Metalloids stand in defense of the human race. They are designed to be a power source to their giant mecha battlesuits, and therefore, are unable to leave the exo suits that contain them like flesh. Metalloids appear more human than machine, and if not for their exosuits, it would be difficult to tell them apart. Commander Odrin is one of several UEC mecha pilots that can be selected in the game. Eidolon is popular fighting game where the players cannot only just fight Mecha versus giant alien threat, but also play as the pilots outside their battlesuits. There are game modes where two characters can be chosen for a tag team cooperative fight. Eidolon contains a deep story about Earth’s battle to survive and the frustration with the Metalloids being treated more like weapons than human beings. While it is apparent that they aren’t human, they feel as such and dislike when the UEC considers them expendable. [b]Character Relations:[/b] Open[/hider]