[@Agent 47]
Great changes! As for your concerns about the riddikulus charm, it's more than fine. If Thomas finds it funny, then it'll work! He's accepted, and can be put in the character tab. :)

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[@ZoeMcQueen95]
Good changes, but there are still a handful of issues:
- For one, we'll need more description in her appearance. While it lists all of her features just fine, we need a bit more. Good examples are things like "sticks tongue out while concentrating", or "her nose crinkles up when she smiles", or "has a tendency to snort when laughing"- anything to make her feel a bit more realistic.
- While you've mentioned the grudge against the Charms teacher, why just him? It's strange for a child to harbour only one grudge against one person if they're being irrational about it. It doesn't really fit in with the rest of her personality unless you mentioned it as a common and somewhat visible flaw of hers, not a one-off occurrence.
- Her personality finishes on an unfinished sentence?
- While you've clarified that she's the youngest now, her backstory is very sparse. All you've mentioned are her sibling's names and how many she has, and also what societal class she is. Where's the detail? She's the youngest of 8, and you've not mentioned anything about her relationships with them, what they got up to while they were at Hogwarts, what they do now, or really anything about their - or her - life before Hogwarts. Why was life hard for her being the youngest in the family? Was she bullied, or teased by the older ones? Is there a large age gap so she never had a friend of her own/near age? Was the family particularly poor so they couldn't afford anything? The only mention of her parents is that they don't have time for her anymore because "they're taking care of her siblings". If she's the youngest of 8, then her siblings will either be in Hogwarts with her, or will have graduated and be adults. Why would they need looking after?

Still a bit of fixing up to do, I'm afraid.