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[@Over Illusion] Just to be clear, Mental Pollution at A is fine by you? Also, I mentioned that the Gigantic Beast Hunting skill represents a vital part of Lancer's legend, so I was wondering if I could merge that effect with his Noble Phantasm.

Magic Resistance is definitely going down to D, and I apologize for misrepresenting the Type of his Noble Phantasm as Anti-Unit. This is due to the lack of info on the wiki, which for example, actually classifies Unlimited Blade Works as "Anti-???". Go figure.

As for Eye for Art... I'll re-read the skill list to see if I find something important enough to switch it off, otherwise, I'll be keeping the skill, knowing its original connotation.

EDIT: I don't know, man. I can pull a lot of things off this Heroic Spirit's barber basin--err, head, but nothing really seems to hit the mark. The revised sheet is in page 8, if I'm not mistaken.

EDIT 2: Revamped his Noble Phantasm to an Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasm, granting additional buffs when targeting structures.

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Name: Alonso Quixano (Don Quixote)

Class: Lancer

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Appearance: (I'll post this later when I have more time)

Weapon: La Mancha Spear ~ This is just a rusty spear. Under the effects of his Noble Phantasm, it can transform into an enchanted spear with enhanced durability, making it practically indestructible and increasing its damage by 30 points.

Personality: 

Don Quixote is almost completely insane, but he is actually capable of backing up his strange manner of viewing the world with solid arguments. Even if anyone were to argue with him regarding his delusions, claiming that the knights in the stories that literally drove him crazy were all but non-existent legends, he would try to explain the concept as vehemently as possible to the point when the other person either gives up due to frustration or loses sight of reality trying to comprehend his line of argument. Below his madness, however, lies a sense of sentimentality and nobility that takes form when he's not busy crashing his reality against that of the rest of the world.

History: 

Don Quixote, born Alonso Quijano, was once a bored noble from the La Mancha region of Spain with enough money to last him the rest of his life, and bookshelves full of knightly romances. He bore an unnatural attachment to books of this genre, and eventually he read so many of these stories that he went nigh-insane, believing firmly that he was a knight-errant in a world without chivalry.

Together with his faithful sidekick and "squire" Sancho Panza and his noble steed, an old barn nag named Rocinante, the three go out on misadventures all around the country of Spain searching for fame, glory, and the heart of the love of his life, a "princess" he calls "Dulcinea del Toboso."
Parameters:

STR: C
CON: D
AGI: D
MGI: D
LCK: B

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance (D) - Standard for the Lancer class.

Personal Skills:

Mental Pollution (A) - Due to Lancer having gone mad after reading too many knightly romances, his mental processes have been distorted significantly. At this rank, his chances of being affected by mental interference magecraft are very low. Also, Lancer's logic is impossible to comprehend to anyone not possessing equal or higher ranks of Mental Pollution (Unless a Command Spell is used, of course.)

Eye for Art (C) - Having spent so much time engrossed in reading knightly romances, Lancer has a chance of figuring out the true name of a given Noble Phantasm without witnessing it being used. This all applies only if said Noble Phantasm belongs to a knight (as in the case of Noble Phantasms like Excalibur, Durendal, Rhon... etc.), and hasn't been forged after the publication of the first edition of the literary piece he was summoned from, in 1605.

Unyielding Will (A) -  Throughout his many misadventures, many people from all shapes and sizes had tried and failed to wake Lancer from his knightly delusions. Even when actual knights and nobles assaulted him or tried to take advantage of him, his resolve was firm. At Rank A, Lancer possesses resistance against physical and mental damage. However, said resistance will not hold against attacks that aim at beguiling others - such as illusions. For example, while there is resistance against damage from "falling into a pit trap", no resistance will be in place regarding "making a pit trap appear as solid ground with an illusion.

Noble Phantasm:

Spearheading the Renaissance** ~ La Mancha Spear

Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-20
Maximum Number of Targets: 30

Description: Lancer's spear glows a bright blue, granting him a temporary 1-rank boost to all of his parameters until his mana drops to 0 (Applying the upgrade to C-ranked MGI) While this Noble Phantasm is activated, Lancer's spear can be thrust to launch a beam of blue light from its tip that causes damage to Servants from a longer range with an extra 30 points of damage. Additionally, should this beam come into contact with a magical structure such as a Temple or a Workshop, the beam will explode, causing damage over a large area.  

*I wanted to note that Don Quixote de La Mancha is considered to be the first novel of the European Renaissance, forged by the mind of Miguel de Cervantes as a satire/mockery of culture in the Middle Ages, with Quixote himself becoming a parody of the concepts of chivalry and nobility that defined previous literary pieces... essentially, Quixote's very existence is an assault on the knights' honor.

**This effect hails from the aforementioned windmill scene. I removed the idea of fighting giants because the skill is rather useless in this case, but I figured that if it's useless to slay giants, then he can destroy buildings instead.

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I'll discuss it with the mod when he gets on.