[@FantasyChic] Okay, few things ~
1) Residence should actually be location - need to put there where she is in the US
2) If you could beef up the second paragraph for her psychology, that'd be great. Looking a little thin. 
3) Again, the "Life Since the Altsoba Massacre" paragraph could use some more detail, as well as the recruitment paragraph. Maybe give an example of something she's done.

The dog looks great ^_^