[quote=@Sho Minazuki]
[@Hero] I'll start with the combat stuff. Devout is an actual advanced White Mage class name, not a WHM SMN cross, could benefit from a different name here. Regarding Angelic Voice, I think a better trait may be... "Enhance curative and supportive spells by singing". Casting more quickly benefits an offensive mage more than a defensive one. Perhaps your class could be something like "Divine Songstress" instead? Just make your title your class.

Everything in Techniques belongs in Spellbook also, just for being magically-inclined. Techniques are almost entirely physical, or if they're a hybrid skill that has more basis in being a martial attack (eg. A sword slash with fire buff would be a Technique, but a spell that summons a sword to swing would actually be in Spellbook)

You can have multiple Limit Breaks in each level of it, not to mention they also apply to your stats (10/15/25 in strength/cost, respectively LB1/2/3), so be careful on using LB3. So you can be a little more specific about Limit Break 1, Summon, and describe how each would turn out.

Otherwise the spells look okay, and the Opportunity Skills are acceptable. Just regarding revival spells, there are a few rules regarding that. First, it can only be used very recently to when an ally gets incapacitated, and it will prevent them from taking a strike (I'll have stuff on this mechanic soon, but basically everyone has 3 strikes, they take all three and their character will be either killed or permanently unable to fight and be played).

Now the last part is lore side of things. Summoners are a class of faith in the gods they summon, and the human experimentation is more of a thing for Escain than Songdae. Songdae is also Korean as the base for the nation, so your family name doesn't suit it, however you can actually just change everything to Escain and edit around the Summoner thing (perhaps they were trying to make artificial summoners, or mechanical summoners to summon Alexander and so in this case, they'll have ties to the Alexander cult in Escain). If you change those then it should be fine.
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I know what a Devout is, just chose to use the name since it was fitting the whole religious theme and I wanted her strength to be White Magic, but changing it is whatever. I actually didn't want to do casting by singing but I guess it makes more sense that way so I'll edit Angelic Voice per your suggestion.

See, the Techniques had me confused because it was mentioned that Techniques are things that don't cost MP. So for example, 'Pray' has always been an ability that doesn't require MP, so anything that doesn't take up MP I put it there. That can just be moved down I suppose.

As for the last thing, I made everything all up since I only knew I wanted her to be from Songdae and had little references, I can just change it, no biggie.

EDIT: Actually, I forgot to ask, I left Summon ambiguous because I was a little confused again, are the deities limited to the ones in the country? And would there be a big difference between the parent summon and the children summon (i.e. Summoning Shiva vs Summoning Lakshmi)?