[quote=@Darkwatck01]
Well reading between the lines has always been my thing. After all I am the one who rants "Devils in the Details." Then again, I suppose you have many points by which some need answers others where/are meant to come out as the story progresses.

Answering in no real order but going to over some insight as best I can here.

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0.9: While yes I do like him, he was more or less a carry over from a different character of the same name and kind from a different story of the same surname as this story.

1: Eating problem: Well think about things on a more biological stand point. What he is means he eats a lot, having been out for a while does tend to make one quite hungry, added to it his current size doesn't help much when it comes to eating, at this point he would of put on some pounds that's for sure. While the eating might come off as odd it's more or less him trying to restore energy. (Then again, I won't lie might of embellished how much he really ate >.>)

5: "Bad Attitude" while reading straight out yes, that is very blunt and means only one thing. Then again refer to his interactions with the Salamander and Reaper, not so much bad attitude more on the lines of 'being rude'. Being honest it should read Ill Mannered which I suppose is his one gripe. To him this is one sick joke that he is forced to go along with and 'coping' by joking and more or less being rude. (You saw through me like glass here, it was more or less a read between because while yes he is ill mannered, he is showing little respect for people, eating the dead for starters.)

208: While he uses Ice schooling of Magic, this should alude to him being 'on the light side of the force'. This is suppose to be later in the story but I will drop a little bomb. Edward isn't the good guy here. (Will I could drop more but holding back because Thin said it was story related when we talked)

85435: Laziness: Oh this is a bad one but I feel I should explain a little. As you saw the Salamander though if him '[i]It seems he now resembles humanity in both stature and foolishness[/i]'. This has a double meaning behind it. Perhaps his laziness is just a guise word for not showing his true face or even acting like he should. (We keep in mind that these two know each other)

(I gave up on numbers): I calmed Tank/DPS as muilty-Roling because he might be able to take a hit or two, he would fall more under the latter, that is DPS. Calming a dual-role was a bad move it was defense and a bad played one so I would like to make the amendment for current state: DPS. (Fair is fair and I take my lumps with wooden hammers plz)

(ufe): Doesn't know whats going on: The orginal idea was for him to be clueless but that floped into its self. So I suppose right now it means he doesn't know whats going on in the world. More or less questioning internally 'what the hell is going on'. (But flopped on its face and going to be a pain to real that back in.

(.) Weakness: Well he does a quite a few, the Scales are strong, but blunt weapons can break them. He would be weak to what got him last time. (His own self dilution, being a Dragon his Ego is his real killer. {that and well being a Ice School user, obsessive amounts of heat in this form.)

There is more but I will have to talk to Thin about more in-depth stuff. Also, haven't moved it because the GM didn't ask/never found it a problem.


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Well, that clears up the things. Thank you for your in depth response. ^-^


[@Thinslayer], I will try to have a post up within 24 hours.